i was smiling throught his whole thing. so true. clearly you read too much fanfic. and you've also outlined why i read so very little of it. any one of these things will make me stop reading a fic and the majority of them happen on the first page.

i personally really like writing and reading internal dialog and sometimes come too close to the multiple personalities thing that ipoe has perfected. I really try to steer clear of it simply becuase it so often poorly done (though i read a great parody of it).

thanks for the morning smile.